Tuesday, January 13, 2009
Day Number 3
In my younger years i used to stay up till the late hour watching tv. The infomercial that always seemed to be playing is the nutrasystem commercial. Dan Marino(who is old) lost 22 pounds!Wow!Its probably the longest commercial i have ever seem in my whole young life. Chirs Berman(who is fat) went back back back back.....GONE!He lost 40 pounds.Wow! I still think that this commercial is anoying.The End.
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Have you ever heard of breaking the chain of thought? Because mentioning Blake in the middle of a thought breaks the flow of your writing. Try to keep him in the beginning or end only--better yet, you could just keep him out!
Watch your sentence formation. After the period, include a space & double check capitalization.
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